there's still stuff to fix (hair problems and bald spots and the explosion )and one shot is still unrendered : )) and pls watch it with sound on, thanks
Great work! I particularly like the facial expressions on your character's close up. Also the opening lead-in music is now a lot better than the quietness you had in the previous version.
Toward the end, the character slips up and lands on his head - this to me seems still a bit unnatural looking as there doesn't seem to be a reason he ends up on his head apart from perhaps slipping on the rug? The cactus spines also look slightly too thin to me.
thank you, well the cactus scene wasnt rendered yet, i just left it as it was in previews, spines will look more menacing when its done : )) . im thinking about inserting a short scene of his foot slipping on the rug, just before he slips : ) cheers!
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Toward the end, the character slips up and lands on his head - this to me seems still a bit unnatural looking as there doesn't seem to be a reason he ends up on his head apart from perhaps slipping on the rug? The cactus spines also look slightly too thin to me.
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